Another group of great descriptive writing pieces about scary houses we might have visited...
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Dear Ms.McLean's Class, I love all the fun and interesting titles and stories. I even got freaked out when I was reading one. Are you guys going to do a book about Christmas? I hope you do. Sincerely, Bling Dog.
Hello Ert, I really like the way you made the ending really creepy, it was overall good. But I don’t really like the whole lot of zombies and Frankensteins chasing you. You did really well. Yours Sincerely, Tim
Hi Mathgirl, I really like your story ‘Haunted House of Death’, especially the ending. You have used a lot of detail and adjectives, and that’s what makes a good story. It would be so scary if you had a friend, and then every Halloween they would turn into a zombie! That’s probably the part of the story I like the most. Are the characters friends or are they made up? Kind regards, Rebecca
Dear Slammins, Hi I just wanted to say I really like your spooky house story. I like how you said in my mind my brain was telling me to get out of DIE!! I also really like your house pitcher it looks really cool. From Sam
Hi allstar28 You made a great Halloween story for the classes around the world. I had liked it because it had creepy zombies paintings that i could imagine. There were sudden parts of the story. The which i had liked the best when the house crumbled down. sincerely 4A
Hi Liv4, My name is Matilda and I think your spooky story was awesome. I loved how it was intense and how I felt nervous just reading it. I also felt like I was really in the haunted house and someone was trying to get me. The descriptive words you used were brilliant and I didn’t get lost in the story so I understood every sentence in your story. I think you the picture really matched the story. I got goosebumps reading it. I think you did a really good job on your story. Best regards, Matilda.
Hi Liv4 My name is Emily and I am from Australia. I loved your spooky story it made me feel like I was in the story, It was giving me the butterflies just reading it. The words and description was super. I really felt like something was wrong. From Emily
Hi Soccer13, I really like your spooky story. I like the end and when you opened the door with the gooey door handle. I just wonder why your mum would drop you off at a spooky house like that. From Chloe
Hi mathgirl I think that your story is great how you explained it and it was spooky story, I also got a great picture in my head of what was happening in the story. From Charli
Hello, the scary story sounds awsome. My class also wrote a scary story just like your class. My teacher Mrs. Carroll let us add in a scary creature. Your story's seem great!
11 comments:
Dear Ms.McLean's Class,
I love all the fun and interesting titles and stories. I even got freaked out when I was reading one. Are you guys going to do a book about Christmas? I hope you do.
Sincerely, Bling Dog.
Hello Ert,
I really like the way you made the ending really creepy, it was overall good. But I don’t really like the whole lot of zombies and Frankensteins chasing you. You did really well.
Yours Sincerely, Tim
Hi Mathgirl,
I really like your story ‘Haunted House of Death’, especially the ending. You have used a lot of detail and adjectives, and that’s what makes a good story. It would be so scary if you had a friend, and then every Halloween they would turn into a zombie! That’s probably the part of the story I like the most. Are the characters friends or are they made up?
Kind regards, Rebecca
Dear Slammins,
Hi I just wanted to say I really like your spooky house story. I like how you said in my mind my brain was telling me to get out of DIE!! I also really like your house pitcher it looks really cool.
From Sam
Hi allstar28
You made a great Halloween story for the classes around the world. I had liked it because it had creepy zombies paintings that i could imagine. There were sudden parts of the story. The which i had liked the best when the house crumbled down.
sincerely 4A
Hi Liv4,
My name is Matilda and I think your spooky story was awesome. I loved how it was intense and how I felt nervous just reading it. I also felt like I was really in the haunted house and someone was trying to get me. The descriptive words you used were brilliant and I didn’t get lost in the story so I understood every sentence in your story. I think you the picture really matched the story. I got goosebumps reading it. I think you did a really good job on your story.
Best regards,
Matilda.
Hi Liv4
My name is Emily and I am from Australia. I loved your spooky story it made me feel like I was in the story, It was giving me the butterflies just reading it. The words and description was super. I really felt like something was wrong.
From Emily
Hi Soccer13,
I really like your spooky story. I like the end and when you opened the door with the gooey door handle. I just wonder why your mum would drop you off at a spooky house like that.
From Chloe
Hi mathgirl
I think that your story is great how you explained it and it was spooky story, I also got a great picture in my head of what was happening in the story.
From Charli
Hey Navydog,
Your spooky story is awesome and it gave me the creeps. you have a pretty good idea of how to write a horror story.
From Callum.
Hello,
the scary story sounds awsome. My class also wrote a scary story just like your class.
My teacher Mrs. Carroll let us add in a scary creature. Your story's seem great!
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