Apr 29, 2014

Mr. Bale

"Should I push the yellow button?" Mr. Bale asked himself.   He wondered and wondered and decided to push it .The house started to shake and Mr. Bale flew back at the wall. He broke his right rib. What the heck is going on with the house Mr. Bale asked himself?

The house landed hard, Mr. Bale stood up and looked outside through the window and saw he just landed on the moon. He went down stairs and saw a space suit laid out on the ground. He put it on and opened the door and slowly walked out. It was hard to breathe.   He looked at his air tank and saw it was on empty and hurried inside.  He was so scared he just wanted to go back to earth so he pushed the button.

The house started to rumble and took off like a bullet. He’s going back to earth. The house landed hard. Mr. Bale stood up with pain and looked outside. People stood outside and looked right at him.                                                                                                                                           

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

this is a great story.
You should make a sequel!
This would make a great horror story siris!
Even though i don't really like scary stories, this one is really good. It is not REALLY scary so it could be good for all ages.